Of Nursery Rhymes and Falling In Love: Commentary
Wednesday, December 16, 2009
quillnotpen is definitely ONE of my FAVORITE fan fiction writers out there. And it's not because she's writing a RiRin ( my second favorite pairing) fan fiction (which i must admit, is pretty good too...) but because she's just a great writer. Even if it wasn't a daragon fan fiction, i still would have read her story,
Of Nursery Rhymes and Falling In Love (but, it would take a longer period of time for me to read it.)
The story is about a kid who asked Dara Park to be his mommy and Jiyong to be his daddy (And, you have to read the whole story on your own. I don't want to reveal everything here. After all, not all of you loves spoilers). Funny how a KID could make two ADULT realize their feelings for each other.
I just love kids. From
A Wonderful Life, to
Three Dads and One Mom and to
Baby and Me. I want to KIDNAP all the kids. And Ri-e will now be a part of my TO-BE-KIDNAPPED list.lol
What I love about this story is that it's written well. It's long (for me, it is), but while reading it, i didn't have to scroll down and skip some boring parts (yes, if the story is BORING, i will skip some parts and just fake a comment.)
I love the mixture of sweetness, and playfulness (and naughtiness) of each character (and of the story too). And I love how you ended the story. A child's innocence never failed to make me smile. Haha, someday, you will UNDERSTAND what the word BUSY means, little Ri-e.
This fic is just... JJANG. I can't say something bad against it. And this is suppose to be a commentary where i NEED to write all the positive and negative sides of each story that no other reader can do. But, like i said, i can't say something bad against it. My readers here who haven't read the fic would have wonder, "This fic must be really good, right?" Well, why don't you check it out.
Of Nursery Rhymes and Falling In Love by quillnotpen
rating: 5 STARS
Juiced 8:15 PM
