Help Me, I Need You: Commentary
Tuesday, December 29, 2009
Honestly speaking, I was shocked when I found out that
bb21_fan is only 13 years old. I mean, come on, she's THIRTEEN? She writes BETTER than me. I already told her that I think she's mature for her age, but that's not a negative thing (that means she's wiser compared to the people of the same age group.). Anyway, let's not talk about the author, let's talk about the fan fiction.
Help Me, I Need You... is a story about a girl who got into a car accident and she became a spirit. In order to return to her body, she must successfully finish her mission and her mission is... to make Kwon Jiyong, the leader of the idol group Bigbang, find his soulmate.
The plot kind of reminds me of
Just Like Heaven, but of course, bb21_fan made a lot of twist to make this story different. In the first place, the girl in the movie doesn't even have a 'mission'...I guess they were just fated to be together. In the fan fiction on the other hand, I love how stubborn each character were. In the first place, stubbornness creates the complications in every story. If you're too stubborn to admit what you truly feel, then a more complex story will result. (but on the light side, if they weren't stubborn...the story would have been boring right??I mean, who doesn't want some drama???)
So there. The story has a great plot. It's written well. It's long (and I was surprised because I didn't scroll down and skip some parts like I usually do with other long stories...) and it's DRAMA. You have no idea of how much i LOVE DRAMA.
And, I fell in love with the last chapter. I mean, I kind of cried because of Youngbae and I really had a goosebumps after I heard Dara and Matt's conversation about Youngbae. (Of course, I won't say it directly because I don't want to spoil those who hasn't read this fic yet.)
All in all, I give this fic 5 stars. For a 13 year old, bb21_fan surely is a talented writer.
But like I usually say in other of my commentaries, this is just my opinion and you have to read it on your own first. So, check out
Help Me, I Need You...~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-ri
Juiced 9:56 PM
