12-30-09
Wednesday, December 30, 2009
Hi dearies, sharing some new fics I added in the fan fiction index. The last one is from soompi, so you have to log in before you can read it. And, just a reminder, I'm just gathering the fan fictions, I don't own the fan fictions here (well, except for the ones I wrote. If it's written by oblivious2dobvious, then its mine.). I don't want to receive an email or PM which contains things like "Please update blah blah blah..." and I didn't even write that fic. Sigh. You don't know how embarrassing that is for me. And I don't want the other authors to accuse me of stealing their fics. So, there.
HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYONE. LET'S SPREAD THE DARAGON LOVE.~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-ri
Juiced 12:03 AM
Help Me, I Need You: Commentary
Tuesday, December 29, 2009
Honestly speaking, I was shocked when I found out that
bb21_fan is only 13 years old. I mean, come on, she's THIRTEEN? She writes BETTER than me. I already told her that I think she's mature for her age, but that's not a negative thing (that means she's wiser compared to the people of the same age group.). Anyway, let's not talk about the author, let's talk about the fan fiction.
Help Me, I Need You... is a story about a girl who got into a car accident and she became a spirit. In order to return to her body, she must successfully finish her mission and her mission is... to make Kwon Jiyong, the leader of the idol group Bigbang, find his soulmate.
The plot kind of reminds me of
Just Like Heaven, but of course, bb21_fan made a lot of twist to make this story different. In the first place, the girl in the movie doesn't even have a 'mission'...I guess they were just fated to be together. In the fan fiction on the other hand, I love how stubborn each character were. In the first place, stubbornness creates the complications in every story. If you're too stubborn to admit what you truly feel, then a more complex story will result. (but on the light side, if they weren't stubborn...the story would have been boring right??I mean, who doesn't want some drama???)
So there. The story has a great plot. It's written well. It's long (and I was surprised because I didn't scroll down and skip some parts like I usually do with other long stories...) and it's DRAMA. You have no idea of how much i LOVE DRAMA.
And, I fell in love with the last chapter. I mean, I kind of cried because of Youngbae and I really had a goosebumps after I heard Dara and Matt's conversation about Youngbae. (Of course, I won't say it directly because I don't want to spoil those who hasn't read this fic yet.)
All in all, I give this fic 5 stars. For a 13 year old, bb21_fan surely is a talented writer.
But like I usually say in other of my commentaries, this is just my opinion and you have to read it on your own first. So, check out
Help Me, I Need You...~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-ri
Juiced 9:56 PM
ADVANCE HAPPY NEW YEAR APPLERS
Sunday, December 27, 2009
WRITE...NO ONE'S STOPPING YOU...
As you all know (or most of you), I'm a writer myself. No, I'm not one of those great writers out their, but I just love to write. I don't follow the parallelism rule, my choice of words are so kindergarten and I suck in spelling. But, you know what? I don't care. I want to write, I don't care if you read my stories or not.
So, what's my point exactly? Well, I just want to encourage you, my fellow applers, to write your daragon fan fictions. So what if you're not born as a writer? Just let your creative juices flow and I'm sure, you're going to have a great story.
Writers.Be Sensitive...As writers, we must be sensitive. We should think of our readers, after all, they are the ones 'appreciating' your work. Choose a font style and size that won't hurt the readers eyes. Long updates doesn't necessarily mean that your readers will appreciate it. The last thing you want is a reader with eye strains right? Warn the people if there will be scenes not suitable for a certain age group (some of the writers don't follow the rules, LABEL your work.)And for winglin writer, dearies please don't put too much colors on your background. Make sure that the story is readable without highlighting it. And, make sure the colors you choose are not too LOUD.
NEW STORIES...R...R...R...I talked to one of the green applers lately (HI MASTER PERVY!!!) and we noticed that almost all the new Daragon Fan Fictions are R. I'm not saying I hate R (i'm wrote about 3 R fics already!!!) but, this is just...alarming. So, if you're a good writer, you don't even have to write an R. Yes, I know that R can catch more attention, but if you're one hell of a writer (with a great story line), I'm sure you can attract readers too (I'm writing 2 PG fics.Yeah!)
LOL.
That's some of my concerns.
Anyway, I'm advertising my official entry to the green appler's site.
Pride(it's still in YGL.Log-in so that you can read it.)
~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-rips. want to read all my fics?? just visit my blog,
Oblivious Obli.
Juiced 11:46 PM
12/23/09
Wednesday, December 23, 2009
Juiced 2:20 AM
The Hidden Love: Commentary
Saturday, December 19, 2009
I'm currently watching Glee and the internet connection is really killing me. I grew impatient waiting, so I just went to winglin and check if someone left a comment on my story. But, i forgot all about my fic when I saw that Hagocimit updated
The Hidden Love. The last time I read it, it was already Chapter 63, that means...2 Chapters before she ends the whole thing. But as I click it, I realized that she finished it.
Yeah, the ENDS NOT NEAR... IT'S HERE.
Actually, I was debating on whether I would write a commentary about this fic. Not because my connection is so slow that writing this would probably take an hour or so, but because this fic is too good that I may not write a worthy commentary. But, 65 great chapters don't deserve a single line comment. That's why I decided to write this.
I seem to be saying this a lot, but Hagocimit is one of my favorite writers (please don't think I'm just saying it for flattery. I can give you a list of the writers I hate and like if you want.Just PM me in YGL.) She writes well... she's really good in describing (a thing a really suck at) and she has this way of giving me goosebumps(last chapter dear...*shivers*) while reading her fic (and she made me bawl in Chapter 63. I swear, I was crying like a five year old kid and...oh, did i mention that i was in my dad's OFFICE that time. I'm so embarrassed now.)
Also, what I like about her is that she talks to her readers. She takes time to read her reader's comments and she even responds to them ONE by ONE. And, did i mention that she receives approximately 20 comments per chapter? 20x 65= 1300. See? She has to respond to that many comments. (Haha. That's just some approximation. She posts several chapters sometimes, so 1300 is NOT the real number. But, i wrote about it for you to say thank you to her for her effort.)
Enough of the author...
What I like about this fic is that YB has found someone. I know, most of the authors out there uses YB as the OTHER GUY and he's always the one left alone. Seriously people, even if it's just fan fiction, YB deserves a deeper role and not just the other guy.
I really like the mixture of Drama, Suspense, Romance and Comedy of this fic. And, I like it more because Hagocimit based it in REAL events. It will make the fans think..." What's the story behind the me2day post?" "Why do they look...sad? Did something happen?" This fic tells us that there's more that meets the eye and we really should read between the lines.
Sigh. Before I start blabbing about what I think about every chapter, i have to end this already.
I give this fic 5 stars... and if i could give more than 5 stars...i would.
You want to cry? You want to laugh? You want to feel as if you're in love? You want the feeling of anticipation? Well, then read
The Hidden Love.
Juiced 12:21 AM
Dara's Wish List: Commentary
Thursday, December 17, 2009
as we all know,
neja is the QUEEN OF CLIFFHANGER. she has this way of making the people hate her for ending each chapter with a cliffhanger. but on the bright side, cliffhangers tend to make the readers..WANT SOME MORE...
I was actually feeling guilty for not able to write some comments for her chapters. So, I decided to write a Commentary about her story instead. After all, such brilliant work doesn't deserve a single sentence comment.
I remember the first day my sissy and I saw
Dara's Wish List. The first time i read it, my brain started working and i made some weird predictions about how the story will go. But, out of the 5 predictions i made, none of them was right. Neja has her way of making the people think that THIS AND THAT will happen, but she will create an unexpected twist to make your predictions wrong. In short, neja is a genius!
In this story, Dara is YG's niece, which is a new idea (I mean, what are the odds that Dara is REALLY YG's niece? The idea is just JJANG!!!). Also, we get to see a cross-dressing Dara.
This fan fiction is a combination of a lot of genre. You want some comedy? or Romance? Or drama? This fan fiction have it all. And it's PG! Everyone can read it. (at least, neja doesn't need to worry about minor readers right? lol.)
And, I'm giving this fic 5 stars, not because I'm seung-ri's girlfriend here (well... that's a contributing factor too. NEJA, i want to say I LOVE YOU.) but because it was just sooo good that anyone could read it without scrolling down and skip some parts.
But, like I said in my previous commentaries, this is just my opinion. It's up to you to judge if this fic is really worth 5 stars.
~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-rips. lol... i love my character in the story. yes, i actually have A LOT of exams. and there was a time had 20+ missed calls because I was too busy answering or studying my exams. haha... so, KUDOS to neja! you really wrote about my REAL self.
Juiced 10:56 PM
Of Nursery Rhymes and Falling In Love: Commentary
Wednesday, December 16, 2009
quillnotpen is definitely ONE of my FAVORITE fan fiction writers out there. And it's not because she's writing a RiRin ( my second favorite pairing) fan fiction (which i must admit, is pretty good too...) but because she's just a great writer. Even if it wasn't a daragon fan fiction, i still would have read her story,
Of Nursery Rhymes and Falling In Love (but, it would take a longer period of time for me to read it.)
The story is about a kid who asked Dara Park to be his mommy and Jiyong to be his daddy (And, you have to read the whole story on your own. I don't want to reveal everything here. After all, not all of you loves spoilers). Funny how a KID could make two ADULT realize their feelings for each other.
I just love kids. From
A Wonderful Life, to
Three Dads and One Mom and to
Baby and Me. I want to KIDNAP all the kids. And Ri-e will now be a part of my TO-BE-KIDNAPPED list.lol
What I love about this story is that it's written well. It's long (for me, it is), but while reading it, i didn't have to scroll down and skip some boring parts (yes, if the story is BORING, i will skip some parts and just fake a comment.)
I love the mixture of sweetness, and playfulness (and naughtiness) of each character (and of the story too). And I love how you ended the story. A child's innocence never failed to make me smile. Haha, someday, you will UNDERSTAND what the word BUSY means, little Ri-e.
This fic is just... JJANG. I can't say something bad against it. And this is suppose to be a commentary where i NEED to write all the positive and negative sides of each story that no other reader can do. But, like i said, i can't say something bad against it. My readers here who haven't read the fic would have wonder, "This fic must be really good, right?" Well, why don't you check it out.
Of Nursery Rhymes and Falling In Love by quillnotpen
rating: 5 STARS
Juiced 8:15 PM
12-07-09
Monday, December 7, 2009
NEW FICS...added...
HELLO applers...
gah...sorry...i just updated this list...
in case you're interested...
here are the new fics i saw...
Confessions of an Ex Stakler FanChristmas LoveFragile MemoriesLove Beyond HurtMy Own VIP"Over a Cup Of Coffee"Quiet Before the StormRoyal BloodYou & IYour LoveDangerous LoveNever Thought I Loved You So MuchThe Most Precious ThingA New Type Of LoveBehind The SceneDon't Dream It's OverIn Your CareOf Nursery Rhymes and Falling In LoveTamTam's Real IdentityThe Closer I Get To YouTwistedUnrequited Lovegah...i haven't updated the index for a VERY LONG TIME...
this is the proof...
~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-ri
Juiced 1:31 AM
