Honestly speaking, I like the plot of this story... i love the love-hate relationship and the sexual tension between dara and jiyong...
but i have some problems with this fic...
to the author, do you really know how to speak in English??? Honestly dear... i can't understand what you wrote... and i have to use up some of my brain cells just to comprehend what you're trying to say... (okay, im sorry to be mean, but it's for your own good dear... you need to mature as a writer!)
second... there's a problem with how she wrote it... it's too crowded... full of words...
dear, please, give some space...
my eyes hurt while reading this...
third... it's too dragging dear...
a long update doesn't mean people are gonna love your fic...
we writers must be concerned of our reader... and dragging updates will only make us unsubscribe your fic...
but... i will not criticize this fic all the way...
on the bright side... i love the r scenes (ahaha... im such a green appler...)
so...to the minors, i will never recommend this to you...
if i rate this, i will give it 2 stars...
why don't you read it on your own:
The Way That I Love You~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-ri