Wash Your Tears Away (Comments)
Sunday, November 1, 2009
Wash Your Tears Away (Comments)
[COMPLETED]
this is my own fic, so why would i write a commentary about it?
hmmm... we all know that ourselves are our greatest critique right?
LOL...so, here it goes...
I based this fan fiction from my first novel ever....
i wrote that novel for my english project and believe it or not, it took my two days to write that...
i was looking for some things when i saw the hard copy of the novel, so i read it again...
after rereading it, i was so embarrassed and ashamed.
it was really crappy...
so, i decided to make it better...
i wrote a fan fic out of it...
you know what's funny?
the description of the original characters fits the bigbang and 2ne1 members...
but, in the original story, there were 7 characters only, so i have to add 2 more characters (Chaerin and Seung-ri)...
so, what's the difference of the original to the fan fiction???
1. Bom, Seunghyun, Jiyong and Dara characters died.
Bom died because she committed suicide...
Seunghyun died because he tried saving Bom, but in the end, he can't even save himself...
Jiyong died because of Leukemia(yes...i changed it...)
Dara died in a car accident...
2. The fan fiction was more dramatic than the novel itself...
i don't know, but i really think that my forte is drama...
i love writing drama and tragedies...
observations:
did you noticed that every chapter seems to be a climax???
for every chapter, there's a big question mark...
so, i would like to say sorry to my readers...
you might had high blood pressure because of my fic...
also, i want to criticize my fic because of the observation...
this fic is too dramatic to be considered real...
sorry guys..i was never been good in realism...
but, at least it's written fairly right? (sorry, i don't check my grammar and i don't follow the parallelism rule)
and the most important thing is that it's readable...
LOL
if i rate this fic, i'll give it 4 stars...
why don't you check it out yourself:
Wash Your Tears Awayit is also available in YGL.
~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-ri
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