I saw this fic a few days ago and i was shocked to see that it's already completed. And since it's completed, i have to write a commentary about this fic...
Here are my several observations...
1. Taeyang CURSED... i can't imagine the good Christian boy Taeyang cursing... but since this is a fan fiction, i'm going to let it slip okay???
2. There are way too many typos dear... if you're going to write a fic, spell check please...
3. It's written in script type... sorry for being so biased... but...i hate this type of writing...
4. Weird...this is a daragon fic right??? why is OGURI and ASAKI here?? whoever are they...i still think that you only changed their names... sigh...disappointing...really...
all in all... this fic is not written well... the idea is great...but... the story is just...arghhh... frustrating...
one day she says that she has feeling for Jaejoong...then the next...she's already in love with Jiyong???
gah...
i'll give it 2 stars...
and...read them yourselves:
I Hate Youmaybe i'm just mean today...
~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-ri