this is the first ygladies daragon fan fiction i will make a commentary here...

the author just updated this, and since it's still fresh... i want to write something about it...

(to the author... this is a healthy criticism okay??? hope that i won't offend you...)

the story line is different from the other fics... and that's good...

at least, we can breathe some fresh air right???

the fic started out great... and it was really interesting...

but, as the author kept on updating this fic, i just noticed something...

the updates are becoming longer and longer...

and boring and boring ( i don't read the whole thing anymore...i scroll down because i find it really boring...)

sorry to the author...

we authors must be concerned of our readers...

it doesn't mean that the readers will love it if you have a novel-like update...

updates are too long and are dragging...

but, i have to commend you...

your humor is really good...

(of course i will love it... im a premed student and you mentioned all those internal organs and i love it!!!)

and to the author...one question...

DO YOU ALWAYS TALK IN THIRD PERSON???

obli talks in third person too... but people find it annoying so she stopped it...
(here we go again....)
---> don't worry about this dear...i actually like talking in third person...

to the readers of this blog, why don't you read this fic on your own: I Do...

But...be careful okay?? you might get eye strains (like me...)

i'll give this fic 4 stars despite of my criticism okay? i still love the story line...

~OBLI aka mrs lee seung-ri

ps. to non-ygladies member...you MUST register for you to read ygladies fics...